Writing
Today in Y3 we did some writing about this picture. We had to try of really good words and sentences that described the picture that was on our whiteboard. Everyone who was in class had a go. If you like our writing leave us a comment ……… we love to read them.
Jessica H -The picture is a beautiful sunset. I like the way the sun reflects on the water.
Jessica J - Colours are exploding in the clouds and the ocean is shining brightly.
Ellie - I love this picture. The colours are purple, orange, yellow, red, and black. It is glistening and it is beautiful.
Sam F - It is very bright with lots of different colours.
Josh - It has lots of colours, purple and yellow.
James - It is lovely and gentle and enormously happy and generous.
Grace - The water glistens and reflects in the glittery, most amazing picture.
Cameron - This picture is exploding with brightness and collects all the light and has extra glistening and reflecting water.
Daniel - It is colourful and bright and it has a bit of black in it and it glistens.
Kelton - I like this picture because it is fabulous.
Rebecca M -It is really clear and colourful and has loads of detail and looks really beautiful and looks like an explosion.
Ryan C - The sun is setting when the sun looks like an explosion and the sea shines
Nicole - The sunset is so wonderful they glisten in the night.
Darcey -I think that the picture is wonderful and the colours that are in it are pink, orange white, purple and yellow and it is cheerful.
Alex H - I think that the picute looks lovely.
Sam - It is a wonderful picture and looks like a glittery sunset.
Bethan - This picture is very colourful and looks like fire and is fantastic. It looks like a fire explosion.
Tom - The picture is bright and beautiful.
Amy - There is a beautiful sunset, red and orange glistening across the ocean’s gentle waves.
Oscar - It has so much shining and good and fantastic and its just great and pretty. It is an explosion and red and orange and so much light.
Although there was a bit of nagging to put names on writing some of us didn’t!
If you wrote (and I think Sophie, who came up with the wonderful word “shimmering” was one) a piece of writing, and it isn’t here, come and see me tomorrow and I will put it on the website.
By the way it was really nice to be back with my first Year 1 class this afternoon. They have really grown up!
